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A new beginning by ~MJK666:iconMJK666:



There was a room, a bleak cell, with only a shoddy, uncomfortable bed and a sink in it.  The cell was occupied, the first time in 30 years has even this obsolete prison had been occupied.  The man occupying the cell was an enigma to everyone.  People he met, people who knew him, and most of all, the people who imprisoned him.  He has been at their mercy for 6 months, and hasn’t spoken a word.  Every day since he came they had tried to get any information out of him, only to be greeted by an ominous silence, as if he was in control, rather than the other way around.  They fed him, and ask him in for testing, all of which he complied with... in silence.  After the 25th week, Ms. Ailer, the woman in charge of interrogating him visited him in person.  She strolled down the cell block with an air of confidence and expensive perfume.  Perfume always made him cough, he hated it. She walked towards him, her high-heels clicking against the concrete floor.  She was wearing a navy blue business suit, with a white blouse underneath it.  She had cold blue eyes, and beautiful black hair.  If he had not been so disgusted with her character, he would’ve considered her attractive, but he didn’t consider her so.  This was the second time she had come to him.  But this time, it would be different, they both knew it.  She spoke with a sultry, yet intimidating voice, “So, do we feel like talking today?”  The man in the cell only replied with silence.  “Typical.” She scoffed, trying to antagonize him, or insult him... to no effect.  

“What? Are you to stupid to talk, or ar you just afraid?”
“...”
“Seems I was right.  I will be leaving, and by the way, your devices will be destroyed if you keep doing this.”

He spoke, his voice was low, deep, and strong.

“... I have no fear, nor does my cranium lack the capability to allow me to verbally communicate.”

Ms. Ailer was stunned, she didn’t even have to try.

“So, why haven’t you?”
“It has not been a necessity to speak with you or your accomplices.”
“So, are you going to tell me what I want to know?”
“Negatory, human.  At least, not without the return of my devices.”
“Sorry, can’t do that.”
“Allow me to reiterate. You have no choice.  You WILL return what is mine, and then I will tell you what you want to know.”
“Oh, really?”

The tables were about ti be turned.  He rose to his full height, a towering 6'5".  He was wearing a loose black shirt and camo pants that were made up of white, gray, and black, and heavy, black, aloytan toed combat boots.  His spiky black hair rose as electricity coursed through him.  He rushed at the prison bars, then bent one of them so he could get through it.  He stood over Ms. Ailer, and looked down on her with seething black eyes, flames licking his skin around them.

“You have no choice, Ms. Ailer.”
“Are you so sure?  There are over 100 elite soldiers here, you’ll ne-“
“Numbers do not factor in my chances of survival, there is 100 of them, and there is only one of me, it’s not fair to them.”

Ailer, for the first time in a long time, was afraid.  She knew that this man was serious.  And he had proved himself by bending and breaking NASA grade titanium with his bare hands.

“Okey, you win.  Guard! Get the devices out of lab storage A.”
“Yes ma’am.”

A few minutes later, he had brought them all back.  They consisted of a small black and red strip, mimicking the shape of a spinal column, his in particular.  The other three were weapons.  One was a black rifle frame with an opening in the middle.  Another one was small, about as big as a pistol, and looked exactly the same were it not for a large clip of glowing green crystals.  The last one was large and gray, with a column of the left side on it going farther back than the rest.

“Thank you, Elaine.  Here are the answers to your questions. My name is Alec Dantez Jaegar, I am from Arisia.  I have no ties to any government on your planet, and all of the abilities you saw are bred in to me and cannot be transferred, and yes, I am a telepath.”

This time, it was her turn to be silent, she was stunned, not only had he kept his promise, he had admitted to what geeks everywhere were claiming, aliens do exist.

“Will that be all?”

She could only give a stunned nod.

He looked at her, clearly puzzled, wondering whether all humans were as easily able to be broken mentally than Elaine Ailer.

He then looked into the night sky, and his eyes flashed red, and he was gone.

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Alec now stood atop a large office building, looking at the night streets below, still alive with people, arisnoids if you will.  Considering how frustrated he was with this world and its people, he was still happy, even though this exact city was where he almost killed Alicia (pronounced with lease, rather than sha).  He never wanted to hurt, her, they had been together for so long, than they went their separate ways, and then they met again, here, when he was trying to rescue that angel, was her name Aqua?  That’s what she said anyway.  Ah, her name was Aqua Marinus.  He had never seen him before, but he knew her all too well.  She had fought against him with her group, and he against her with his group at least 10 times, though she never got a good look at him, he got plenty of her.  He was absolutely infatuated with her, but would never admit it to her to her face, she was just too... different.  She had a strict regimen, he never had one, she was in a war, he wasn’t.  She was probably had a strict moral grid, he definately didn’t.  She was probably a prude, he knew he wasn’t.  Then, a realization hit him.

“When was the last time I got some?”

Knowing the answer, he dismissed the question as stupid, and moved on with his thoughts, thinking back to the night where he actually felt love for another woman after Alicia.  

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“Damn them, damn them and damn fanaticism!  I know I should’ve stopped those stupid bastards at the crucification.”

Alec had seen them, after tracking Aqua’s movements for some time, anyone else would’ve called it stalking, but he knew it wasn’t.   He was going to kill her, at least, that was the plan.  Then those guys had shown up, and gagged her with chloroform, and were loading her into a van.  The must’ve thought she was an angel.  Damn them for getting heaven and Serra mixed up.  He could’ve killed them right there, but he was going to take his time, something he was notorious for doing.  He followed the van back to their hideout, and followed them in.  The two carrying her were accompanied by three others, and they met a group consisting of about 30 people.  He never much cared for nmbers.  She was presented to a leader on an altar, with a woman standing beside him, who was wearing a hood and robes as to not reveal her appearance.  He held his arm ready as power flowed through his suit, the crimson circuitry casting a slight gleam on the black body.

“Cut off the head and the body will die.”

He charged and fired it off, only for it ti be intercepted by an energy blast from the woman, who cast off her robe and leapt at Alec.  He saw her gold visor and neat dark brown hair, and he knew who it was.  He dashed away, back behind her.

“Alicia, I never thought you’d be stupid enough to join these people.”

Her voice returned, mocking and playful.

“I never thought you’d be so stupid to stay on Earth.”
“No place that’s good near here besides this one.”

Alec began to turn an ebon color, as something horrible built up inside of him.  He then began to scream in agony as black energy burst from within him, killing off everyone in the building except him, Alicia, Aqua, and the two idiots guarding her.

“Like that trick Alicia?”

Alicia only stared at him, then she leapt at him, punching him square in the face, and she continued to pummel him with punches, kicks, and energy attacks, leaving Alec battered and almost dead within a few seconds.  She was ready to deliver the final blow, when Alec reached up, and a black-blue flame erupted from his palms, drenching everything in deadly fire, making her remember how most of her family died, save her and her aunt and uncle.  She couldn’t face the flames that threatened to devour her alive.  By this time, Alec had stood up, and charged his suit again, his right arm glowing a blood red.  He charged his former love, and punched her in the gut, releasing his fist after it was buried in her gut, issuing a deadly red beam, flinging her out of the building and into the night sky, probably sending her flying a good 10 miles.  He then turned to the matter at hand, rescuing an angel from the fires from hell, or something.  He ran down the path the two goons had carried Aqua.  When he finally reached the chamber, it was almost love at first sight.  The beautifulAqua was practically nude, save for her revealing armor, and chained to an altar, but that wasn’t the only reason he was getting extremely flushed at the sightm but also what she had done to the two goons that brought her here, the last one had no eyes and was practically dead, after securing the last chain.  The other one was dying from a fatal hemorrhage of his jugular, and had spread his blood across the room.  She was a killing machine, but one that could obviously defeated, and if that could happen... well, he was getting ahead of himself with those thoughts.  He walked up, and carressed one of her long, sensual legs, causing her to squirm under his touch.  She yelled at him, in a very desperate and almost scared voice.

“Get away from me!  Or I’ll do to you what I did to them.”
“Don’t worry, I was just admiring abeautiful artwork. I can be quite a hedonist you know.  I will let you go if you wish it, they are all dead.”

Alec shot four bolts of black napalm, which melted the chains and allowed the bound angel her freedom.

“Thank you for saving me.  I am in debt to you.”
“It is no problem, I should’ve resolved this situation before this.”
“It is alright, I do not believe you could’ve.  Say, what is your name?”
“Alec Dantez Jaegar, and you? “
“Aqua Marinus... Is there something burning?”
“Ah yes, the building is going to probably fall.”
“Crap!  Well Alec, I do hope we meet again.”
“Same here.”
Aqua spread her icy wings, and flew out with a blinding speed.  He stayed for a bit, and then disappeared.

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Alec jumped from rooftop to rooftop, now ready to have a good time, now that his stuff was back at his place, save for the spinal attachment.  On the way to his favorite nightspot, he saw a hated figure.  His name was Nathaniel Williams, a much hated person, at least by every woman who had met him, probably because he was known to brutally beat them after raping them.  This bastard had yet to be aught, and he was going to make sure that now law enforcement would find him alive.  He was dead man.  He’d make sure.
©2006-2009 ~MJK666
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Here it is the first chapter of my new story, please enjoy and comment.

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:icontrulyalien:
definately interesting-you've got a nice concept to work with. "
:iconmjk666:
Thank you. Seriously, thank you

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I'm a saint in sinner's eyes
Curse the Clouds Over California
This is the call to obey
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:iconprettysammi:
hmm good start! ^^


ps DON'T YOU DARE SAY "Thanks sammi" Got it! Your gonna say now watch carefuly..."Thanks SAM" forget the mi it doesn't exist...it's just SAM Sam sam sam S A M Sam! or you could just say Thanks it doesn't matter as long as you don't call me Sammi 'cause it really ticks me off. Yes I'm being a bitch about it but that nick name needs to die like now!


pss Sorry to be so anal about that but it's really been bothering me lately...*eye twitch* which could also explain my lack of comments...sorry about that... ^^;

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:iconmjk666:
It's no problem, I understand that you have a life outside of those you meet here, it became apparent to me last August. :hug: thanks Sam

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I'm a saint in sinner's eyes
Curse the Clouds Over California
This is the call to obey
Let the chaos reign!
:iconangelicdemonslayer:
Interesting . Very Interesting. So Alec and Aqua are ont angel and demon now. They're both aliens from different planets. You also lost Alec's ponytail. Seems like the only thing that's still the same is a couple of names. It's still good though. You did much better about defining who's talking. Nice work.

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:iconmjk666:
I tried, thanks.

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I'm a saint in sinner's eyes
Curse the Clouds Over California
This is the call to obey
Let the chaos reign!
:iconangelicdemonslayer:
You're welcome.

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:iconmjk666:
ALso, Serrans are angels, just from a different plane of existence

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I'm a saint in sinner's eyes
Curse the Clouds Over California
This is the call to obey
Let the chaos reign!
:iconangelicdemonslayer:
So Aqua is still an angel, sort of, but Alec isn't a demon. Am I keeping up with you?

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